Writing

Latley we have been have been doing a lot of debate writing which I've found really fun and here is some work just click on the link.25/09/2012

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Durring the past six weeks we room 13 have been working with room 6 writing fairy tails based on a faiy tail.For expaple the story of the three little pigs and the big bad wolf,mine is three little pigs and big bad shrek.Have a look and comment because it took my buddy and i six weeks to write that out: [|https://docs.google.com/a/greytownschool.com/document/d/1WV5ITHTEezYpAW4Gm8MGcKm_9nu9-o71wKpA5spPkzM/edit#heading=h.l0vd1npa82o7]

I've updated my three little pigs and big bad Human story and here is the link: Date:24/08/2012 PS one more thing PLEASE LEAVE A MESSAGE? [|https://docs.google.com/a/greytownschool.com/document/d/1pgPTCAEO6RKoA5vAilrRSMEZAsJ_cypOLWyTkmGeApY/edit#heading=h.k0bbe7k4lh35]

Here is the link for a test we did a flew weeks ago 10/06/2012. Comment if you wish.

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In this subject we are doing to learn the original fairy tales such as three little pigs and we have to right our version of the three little pigs such mine is still the three little pigs but different names and a different spices of monster: The Big bad HUMAN!Now the link to the Three little pigs and the big bad human is here: [] 6/08/2012

Here is the checklist for the writing work of the three little pigs and the big Human.

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PerspectiveWriting: WALT:the parts of a narrvite and to plan and write a narrvite Date:6/03/2012

Little red from my view: her a small for her age but had great red cockand has deep rich brown eyes and eyes that are the same couler and quite spotey on the face next comes something you can not miss a addventerriss.

Date:28/02/2012

Walt;Parts of a narrative and to plan and write a narrative.

I hear the chatter of bones in the gloomy air,It took me five hours to find the path running away from demons then I walk down the path it was small but close in which was kind of sacrey.Five days pasted and till I have found no way out off that comfiend thought the path sounds were like the hells army marching acrross the pain of life to kill it all but I thought the of wolfs was the an army marching to kill all humans and life off the face of the Earth

Seven days still no the path to my doom with gun and armor in my hand it seemed that my fate was worse than before and it seemed that the forest was breed to confuse travlers with weapons It was highly unlikely to happen to me being on the path but it got weirder and weirder with each passing day.

Eight days in to walk into the forest and before I went in I look at the last part of my sanity and the evil that is within the dark,gloomily air of the forest.As I move in deeper into the deep,dark forest I became to note that I could my walk and I was sacred out of my wites with the dark,cold air of the forest and for eight days I finely I am out, free of killing wolfs and free of fleeing!

Lately we have been speaking speeches and here is my speech they go on for three to five minuets on the 5/06/2012.


 * Such grace such beauty you think that dancing is a girl's idea,well think again boys.I am here to talk about why I think boys should dance. **


 * Dance has been believed to start during the stone age about nine thousand year ago and since then has developed into a myriad of different forms.Such as ballet and jazz which developed in two different places but yet became a goble fun job to do.Originally dancing was a way of explaining things in religion just like myths are supposed to do.No one knows when dancing was invented but became a very part of our lives form the very day someone just started moving to the beat of msuic. **


 * firstly I believe that dancing is the best way to keep fit while doing sport like rugby or football.Dancing helps to improve your sport in a myriad of different ways such as improving footwork for those football fans.Then later on those rugby players who wish to have a great range of speed to outrun your opponent as well as coming up with ways to beat your opponent so dancing and sport are linked. **


 * Secondly Do you sit all day alone at home with dad while your sister goes to dancing class.If you wish to improve at school you should join her or him.The benefits of dancing out last any other however you must keep the balance between muscle and flexibility.Both sides of the brain are required to dance so be excited to dance because every movement is getting you closer to being the best dancer you could be.In drawing contests dancing will increase creavity and self confrice and movement for sport. **


 * Thirdly in some places dancing became the daily requirement and I believe that dancing should become apart of yours.Many king such losie XI was a dancer for his hold ruling time of france so if he can do it .Many boy bands such as one direction all lernt how to dance which in turn improves everything they do form school work to there sport if they have one.So if you are a lazy person into a famos super star so get off that seat and get groving. **


 * In conclusion I believe boys should dance and in doing so improve their school work,sports performance and even their social skills. So come on boys dance like no one is watching! **